I liked your poem, a remarkable homage to the peril and enigma of experiencing Mother Nature's forces. And it is written in vernacular for an even more authentic feel.

Humans have always been entranced by the unpredictability and power of nature, striving to uncover its secrets and calamities.

It is also a poem consistent with the news of Mississippi's recent storms and tragedies. Then is a south gothic poem, but very actual.